ocean

Nicely done! I see where you took the original concept and made it your own.

It has very interest and lines, that is good... and shading is helping to enhance it as a piece...

One or two of the little sea bits aren't quite obvious to me, but then again they are helping the subject stand out too. The simple colors- just blue and white- seem to underscore it a bit. Couldn't some more color liven it up? Just a thought.

Some of the bits and pieces on and around her head are just lines and are lacking any white and seem to be just pencil lines. Its a bit inconsistent with rest of the piece and they could be touched up a bit.

Overall, nice little piece.